Snow Flower

I just realized I havn't told you yet. ^-^

I'm doing a manga short called "Snow Flower".

It's about a girl named Yukina Kyuukei, who is sick and dyign, who knows she only has about a week left to live. She was born with the disease, so ever since she was little, she'd write the same wish, Over and over, and fold the paper into a star. She called them "Dream Stars". But, shewouldn't let anyone see her wish. She said her wish might come true if she wished the same wish 100 tines, and it would SURELY come true at 10,000. So, she reaches 21,342 stars, and her wish still hasn't come true. And this is when her doctors tell her she only has one week left to live. So she goes to a shrine, where the Miko explains Karma to her. The miko says that if Yukina does good things for others, her wish will come true. So, she decides to do the best she can to help everyone. This is where our story starts. Meiko Hoshii is just a regular student, waiting to cross an intersection.,.. Then, while the walk light is red, he sees a cat walk into the road, and a car is about to hit it. He screams "WATCH OUT!" And this is where Yukina comes in. She runs infront of the cat, inbetween it and the car, and she just holds her arms out, so the car stops. She saves the can, and Meiko wants to meet her and ask... Why did she risk her life for a cat? But, The light turns green, and people start pushing him. So, he needs to call out her name to get her attention, but he doesn't know it. Then, He notices she's wearing a white dress, which reminds him of snow, so he calls out "Snow!" (As in "YUKI!") Yukina turns around, and their little adventure starts. After learing about the stars, and her wish, Meiko decides that it is his job to figure out her wish, then make it come true. Only, She won't tell him the wish. Meanwhile, A little romance sparks between the two... So what happens when a devil will do anything to break them up?

What do you think of it? ^-^' I have 8 pages (including the cover) done.